nice dynamism! colors are cool too and i think you scorched your hair :D
very cool but as you asked for crits : I would suggest to do less splatter its a controlled beam of super-hot energy I think it would just cut trough him without any splatter ^^ but nevertheless ....man TEEN-challenge you can do whatever you want in a few years from now !keep it upSeb
Parsakoira: Thanks! :)Partisan: Thank you! I was a little undecided on the splatter, but felt that it helped compositionally, so left it in...next time I will try to figure out a way to have it more realistic and yet still work as a composition. Also, I am honoured that you have such faith in my future :). I hope to be one of the best in a few years time (I'm 17 now).